Anakin_Lost

the premise and characters are nice but the grammar and spelling mistakes are so frequent it is crazy how this ended up as the freebie today. author, this one just isn't for me because even by WN standards this is just too broken but I don't want you to think I'm just trashing it. The romance scenes were well done and i liked how you structured his awakening while still leaving some mystery. With a good editor or grammarly, I could see this book on Amazon tomorrow.

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sure, you have a system tag but as of ch 48 there's no hint of a system. it's just "oh the goddess let me see levels/tiers now..." halfway through the free chapters and there isnt really any character the reader is set up to like/hate/feel indifferent to.

a story with a good idea that never materialized. the betrayal leading to transmigration is tired so if you do it, do it right. as some other reviews mentioned, the MC will showcase powers and then the author goes 'oh yeah the goddess helped him with that.' To me, it was a half done attempt complete with mostly ok grammar. it's a fun read but don't expect to add it to your library unless you are truly out of options.

didn't he just fight 12 of them?

i tried to give this novel a chance despite the rating because some novels don't deserve it. this one kinda deserved it. it has poorly translated Chinese slang, hero was replaced with special one or chosen one, and you really have to step it up for a played out troupe. Any long term readers for this novel i am convinced were paid to read as long as they did.

so the rewards from the system are finally dished out in chapter 26. a little drawn out imo but I'll hate read if nothing else 😂

either " will now be opened" or "will now open" works. this just sounds weird