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2023-02-20 01:47

I like that the characters are fleshed out and the world is interesting. The dialogue has depth and you can see the potential of both the author and the novel. The downside is the words are a bit jammed together but it is nothing that a little editing can't fix.

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haven't read any wuxia novels in a while but I like this one, the whole concept of martial arts cultivation is embodied in this novel. 🤯

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Gaming_Arch
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The plots good not to mention the story has you hooked on the first chapter. However, if you do a quick review of it then many mistakes can be fixed

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Lord_Cane
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This has potential if it was just edited more and the grammar is better. But overall, the character designs are great, the dialogue also brings out emotions and the world description is also well done. It would just be smoother for readers once it was edited and the chapters are also a bit longer to set the scene better. Keep up the good work author and I'd like to see your work improve in the future to bring it to it's finest quality.

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One_Singularity
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It’s an okay novel, but the text is all jammed together, it would be hard for readers to read and understand when it’s like that, I think the book has a lot of potential and that the author has a lot of ideas for this novel.

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mattfuncool
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Alright story is great like where it going, but the chaps look quite to be short might want to add more to them. beside that a daily update of the book and this novel can be featured quite a few times or a lot.

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