Review Detail of _Shades_ in Tears Of A Vampire

This has been the most fantastic book I've read. Tough female lead, me likeee.💯 But there are some things author needs to work on. The tenses! Since they were in first person narrative, there should be balance in it because there was a point the author used the wrong tenses in the narrative. Not only that, she used that in the third person narrative too. *World building. Though I'm not good at it too, you can learn and become better than I am. You should talk about how the bar looked like, how he felt when he was working there. How the scene from the sky was when Samantha grabbed his waist and smiled. And some spellings need to be corrected too. I know you're not a native English speaker, but you could edit this with yhe help of apps like grammarly. So far, I'm enjoying this book while ignoring the mistakes. Its gonna be a big book that'd make it. I recommend this.😊