the idea are good but the why did you make the mc 27 in his pass life if he is so dumb seriously you should have made him 15-17 he has known games and story in novel. Yet he didn't think of creating talent for cooking or some researcher skill to know the ingredients that use in the foods. im not telling that this novel is trash or something just giving you idea that make it with less plot holes because its confusing to me who has read novels that its within logic of idea and yours is in the line of below average but still good, so keep up and improve your novel ether when you make new one or continue this.ð
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