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its true that some of us readers are mad because of this my advice is release more chapter for compensation to us for making us wait to long to end a extra background character villain fight

all i can say about this martial peak fanfic is that where is the (what if) or big changes scenario in this. Fanfic are supposed to be like that but this is totally a new novel at this point there is no intervention in the story that some of us reader know because some of us stop reading the original novel when yang kai reach (origin king) or in the (dao source) and above cultivation.So my question is any plans on making a knew one because your novel right now is really not popular at this point. Maybe try starting with the fanfic OC MC being brother of Yang kai or someone with an ancient family hidden to everyone and he interact with some original characters in martial peak and have some of his own opportunity to get his own inheritance or steal some of yang kai cultivation and treasures opportunity with hardwork. And for his future companions some OC heroine for OC MC and maybe some from the store that is being forgotten to join OC MC harem. By the way this is just my opinion on your fanfic don't be offended just giving you my feedback and im not really good in English so sorry if some word in my comment doesn't make sense.

you know the AU back story can be use as reason Hephaestus help them and for the magic sword some business deal to make the for protection and that i think Ares has been confirmed that is with evilus so preventing them from getting magic sword can be use

I'm not offended at all just giving idea and the author can use this if he wants to make the story longer because some fanfic are really short and rush

magic sword and fairy blessings and you can make some AU that the goddess is an acquaintance of Hephaestus since she's a goddess

it's you're novel and its already an AU so you can do whatever you want some novels even made bell a girl i see o reason welf not have a goddess as love interest, and also this is just my suggestion im not demanding changes just helping give ideas for you're novel