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Why is the explanation more than the plot. you have half a chapter of plot and interaction and the next one and half chapter of author just explaining things. just move on with the plot. there is no need to explain everything as we all already know of the things you explain. just keep it to one or two paragraphs.

DOULUO DALU : 2 Other Worlds Heavenly Dragon

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いいね
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返事はありません。最初になろう!