Jkr

In the legends of webnovel

probably sell ice to aokiji

Better than most novel here in webnovel but by i eat tomatoes standard its not that good. just couldn't connect with the character that much mostly because he never faces real life do or die atleast in the first 500 chapters. it is combination of many of his past novels but not as interesting characters or plots.

Wanted to support the author for this beautiful piece. Good job on the character and writing quality. just hope you update more frequently..

Why is the explanation more than the plot. you have half a chapter of plot and interaction and the next one and half chapter of author just explaining things. just move on with the plot. there is no need to explain everything as we all already know of the things you explain. just keep it to one or two paragraphs.

Wow this one is gem. Fresh piece among the herd. Give it a try.

It should be bebe instead of bolt

This is written really well. Especially the narration is really good. Among the narutoverse fanfiction the development can be similar to some of them but the story telling is better than most.

Let me guess all his disciples are enemy of protagonists..... lololololololololololololololollololololololololololololololollololololololololololololololollololololololololololololololollololololololololololololololol

its lack luster.. if you don't have anything to read then try otherwise not worth it.. there are many more novels with similar setting who have done a far better job than this