It reads like a chinese novel, fights a 5 year old so they 7 year old wants to fight him, beats him so the grandfather is agressive with him. Why turn naruto into another low quality chinese novel. Also the PACE IS TOO DAMN SLOW, everytime the MC says something out loud he then need a paragraph of internal dialogue for some reason. Massive blocks of the chapters that are pointless. Chapters could be half of big, still have the same detail and still be slow paced. Its annoying to read.
Hanma_Jack
Liked it!
いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!