Quidanstealsnovels
読書の
458
本を読む
It reads like a chinese novel, fights a 5 year old so they 7 year old wants to fight him, beats him so the grandfather is agressive with him. Why turn naruto into another low quality chinese novel. Also the PACE IS TOO DAMN SLOW, everytime the MC says something out loud he then need a paragraph of internal dialogue for some reason. Massive blocks of the chapters that are pointless. Chapters could be half of big, still have the same detail and still be slow paced. Its annoying to read.
Interesting in the beginning, but the authors quality just declines, so many plot holes, MC personality is all over the place. The side characters and old 'strong' characters are honestly stupid. He gets betrayed by the academy? He's literally the strongest student in hundreds of years, completes the tower, is shown to be amazingly strong and yet they just throw him away and try to kill him? WHAT? They literally want strong students to help the dark faction and yet when they have one they don't prioritie him at all? Like he'd be the first thing you try and secure when the actions attacked, but he's just forgotten about and even is attacked by that same faction. Im so confused about that entire situation. What a stupid and badly written arc, i've never seen a story fall down in quality so much so fast.
Pace is so slow Im going to fall asleep. So much detail and background about characters that will be forgotten when he actually cultivates. Speaking of cultivation? where? he's learning all this boring stuff, stuck at this boring moral city, doing literally nothing but 'training' moral stuff. Im honestly to the point where I skip entire chapters.
Why doesnt he just spend points on a big nuke of a skill instead of all these meh skills. Firebolt weak machine gun, multi firebolt weak machine gun still, fire atro turret weak machine gun... Guy has infinite mana, just get a small nuke and spam it.
Cool background, revenge, restored body. Cool. Stupid system... what a shame. Ruined the story, getting 'characters' makes the world feel hollow, having a bunch of stuff given to him is pointless. Guy struggled to become OP yet now you've mary sued him its making him boring.