I have read up to Chapter 6, and I've found the experience to be quite enjoyable. The novel knows how to put in dialogue that is well put together. My only minor criticism was the lack of exposition in chapter 1-3 (I think...). However, even then you knew when to add detail and when to leave some out. I trust that you that my criticism will be invalid as you gain more experience. I'm confident in your ability to properly use Cliffhangers too! The cliffhanger at chapter 5 made me swipe down as fast I could, if it wasn't for the fact that chapter 6 was already published I would have felt impatient to read more. (Not saying I'm not interested to read more) In conclusion, Your writing quality is superb with minor if not no flaws, even with your frequent publishing schedule. The story has tugged me along nicely, making me excited for future publishes. Character design was solid, nothing to really nitpick about it. IMO you have great potential with your novel. I'm definitely putting this Novel on my Library.
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Thank you for your review, very much appreciated!
