Review Detail of proking in Magic Martial World (Moved to WSA)

According to the first three chapters I read, I must say the story has the potential to grow but there are a few flaws in it which makes it more bland and uninteresting. I'm not saying it out of a bad perspective, don't get me wrong. Sure, the pace would be slow and the author is just trying to establish the MC's character and world building. However, if there is no hooking incident at the start, readers might get bored. The first three chapters are golden ones and the author must try to attract audiences with his plot in any way. The cliche start of the mc getting bullied and, the bystanders explaining his character and whatnot won't cut it. Because these same things we read in another novel, there should be something unique in it so that IT CAN STAND OUT FROM THE OTHER NOVELS. I wrote this sentence caps on purpose, which is to emphasize that a proper foundation of a novel always starts with mc ending up in a dangerous situation or going through some bullying and he found some cheating system to turn the tables around or he found himself in another world or he just found a loophole in a magic spell that does not need mana or talent to use it or he found some pill making him use mana? The possibilities are endless. but the one who has to write is you. So, I won't say no more. The only flaws I saw were extremely slow pace without any smooth flow in the story development and a few exaggerated words not fitting for a young kid who's just in elementary lol. Other than that, author's writing skills are decent. so, I have no complaints about that. Overall, the story is good. After some adjustments to the story flow, it can do wonders. That's all I have to say. All the best author, hope you do well.