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I like to create my own world in the novel.
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proking2 years agoコメントOh, that's what he meant. But I don't know what this law is. I guess, I have to read a bit more.
この段落は削除されました。- proking2 years agoに返信 Kush63
what does that even mean? I will get my law?
この段落は削除されました。 - proking2 years agoコメント
You mean "I will settle the score with you" right? 🌚
この段落は削除されました。 - proking2 years agoコメント
Can't feel what he's feeling. 🤔 It might be life-threatening, yet it feels not so dangerous.
- proking2 years agoコメント
It's no fun when the quests are so easy and not life-threatening at all. 🤔 People might get bored at a point because of this. Should've been more creative to create quests that might be interesting and thrilled to read. This is just boring. 🙄
- proking2 years agoコメント
If you're writing in first pov format, you should write the dialogues in that way too. Try reading some first pov novels to get an idea how they write and describe things along the way.
- proking2 years agoコメント
chapter is too short and I can't grasp what's happening. even if it's a prologue, one should describe something that might give an idea to the reader what this story is about. Otherwise, you should have directly started with chapter 1. that would be better .
- proking2 years agoコメント
who's her?
