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BlackDragneel
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I didn't expect the book to be this bad when I started reading it. The grammar and writing quality is worse than a 6 year olds. The dialects and conversations feel like shower thoughts and feel like robots talking to each other. The story makes no sense what so ever. This is lacking even the most basic common sense. Character development is nowhere to be found. The world is whatever the author wants it to be. If he thinks it should rain feces today it will happen and the reason would be an excuse some preschooler would give as to why he smeared feces all over the house. The romance feels like the Mc is mind controlling them. Like the Mc will throw out a cheesy one liner and "boom" master seductionist. The girl is like drooling hearing some generic one liner. Overall a very big waste of time.

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