BlackDragneel

its's good that you decided to do so. The cultivator aspect didn't really feel like cultivation at all and that made this really boring to read and kind of annoyed the hell out of me. there are alot of plot holes as well the power scaling didn't make any sense so I suggest work on that more. 1 suggestion I have is make him dimention hop to some other cultivation novel or novels and have the dxd dimension as the main dimension with a time dialation that way the cultivation aspect will be more consistent .

The book is fun to read, just continue doing what you do.

Translation quality is quite good but unfortunately the story lacks character. It's just the doulou story copied with a new mc. I typically don't like tang san/master follower type fanfics due to them just being copy pastes of the original story and compared to other great doulou fanfics this one can't even hold a candle to them. All in all just a very disappointing story that had alot of potential.

Not gonna say much other than one word DAYUM.

Very Disappointing start. I don't see this story going anywhere I like. Mc is literally a slave and it is even insinuated that he was plotted against by rias to be one. I guess the MC just replaced issei in the story and it will continue as cannon with minor differences. Very Interesting idea but a very disappointing and frankly annoying execution.

How this trash keeps getting popular is something I don't get. The writing is mtl quality. Story development is on some grass. Characters are held on gunpoint to interact or so it seems. Overall a heaping pile of cringy garbage that people somehow keep making popular. I am not above reading some bad writing and dialect and enjoying them but this I just couldn't enjoy.

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