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Review Detail of Venusean in OWNED BY AN ALPHA

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Venusean
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Here's my review of this story. I would rate it at 4/5 stars, and here's my reasoning for the score; - Writing quality; 4/5 stars. You have good grammar and narration, and it's readable though small punctuation problems hinder it. - Stability: 5/5 - Story Development: 3/5 stars. The story follows the typical ABO story plot and development and is enjoyable, though does not offer a twist or a spectacular development. - Character Development: 4/5 stars. The characters are fleshed out and the reader forms a connection to them. Good job. - World Background: 3/5 stars. From what I've read, the world is functional and works for the context.

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4の人に「いいね!」しました

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