the book has potential but 20 chapters is way to short for reader to get a good feel about the story chp20 just end right in a middle of a conflicts that not how you sell a book because there be people like Mt that font want to invest as we didn't get enough time to feel the book out.
MagusRex
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いいね返事はありません。最初になろう!