Review Detail of UnsatisfiedAuthor in Idle Cultivation

DO NOT READ this if you wanted a book... -That has good grammar. -Good World Building. -With realistic character. -With great story development. -Great plot twist. -Awesome fight scene. This story was made by an inexperienced writer who wanted to have experience in writing. If you STILL wanted to READ the novel after all of the flaws it had then please do. I would also LOVE it if you point out the things I did wrong, the plot holes I didn't see, the character that doesn't feel like he was that kind of character, etc, etc, in short, please do some proper criticizing.