UnsatisfiedAuthor

no, I can't write a fighting scene so I stopped but I'll continue after I polish the outline

Me: The little fella started not liking ice cream for a reason I won't disclose. Also me: Started a flashback!

no if I did it unconsciously

yes..... maybe

DO NOT READ this if you wanted a book... -That has good grammar. -Good World Building. -With realistic character. -With great story development. -Great plot twist. -Awesome fight scene. This story was made by an inexperienced writer who wanted to have experience in writing. If you STILL wanted to READ the novel after all of the flaws it had then please do. I would also LOVE it if you point out the things I did wrong, the plot holes I didn't see, the character that doesn't feel like he was that kind of character, etc, etc, in short, please do some proper criticizing.

This is a spoiler so.... At chapter 13, Gu chen wouldn't be socially awkward anymore, it's because of the demonic phone he obtain. Sounds like a plot hole? I made a description of the uses and function of the demonic phone on the auxiliary chapter. That's all. -Author

No!

really? that's insane

My grammar being bad was something I expected, English isn't my mother tongue.

thanks for the motivation