Review Detail of nXo1d in Small upgrade system

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Rating: 3.2

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The story has a lot of potential, it is a great idea, but unfortunately has terrible execution. The fighting is explained terribly and the author makes a lot of mistakes, he forgets what he has written already, and English is clearly not his first language

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Small_Otaku

11の人に「いいね!」しました

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nXo1dLv3nXo1d

it's alright, don't worry about it, I'm sure with time you will get much better

Small_Otaku:Yes, English wasn't my first language. Sorry, I make lot of mistake. I am trying to improve myself. Thanks for the review.

1yr

Small_Otaku作者Small_Otaku

Yes, English wasn't my first language. Sorry, I make lot of mistake. I am trying to improve myself. Thanks for the review.

1yr