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Review Detail of EverGreen in The Rebirth of The Ancient Sword Sovereign

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EverGreen
EverGreen作者3yrEverGreen

I know my grammar is technically terrible but i will do my best to improve . I hope you will like the novel . if you will have any suggestions or comments don't be shy to share ... @Evergreen

The Rebirth of The Ancient Sword Sovereign

EverGreen

24の人に「いいね!」しました

いいね

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ShadowWind
ShadowWindLv15ShadowWind

Interesting story. However, grammar and consistency with cultivation realms, character names and pretty much everything is really really bad. Do you plan to rewrite from the beginning? I’m 70 chapters in and it’s very frustrating trying to figure out what’s happening with all of the inconsistencies. I’ll probably drop this and hopefully things get better and try to revisit later down the road.

L65haja
L65hajaLv1L65haja

Keep Going !

Yuva_Latre
Yuva_LatreLv1Yuva_Latre

Don't stop

its_L
its_LLv3its_L

so is this harem?

Ashtarot
AshtarotLv4Ashtarot

i hope not

its_L:so is this harem?
Eternalsylph
EternalsylphLv14Eternalsylph

pls no harem stop sword cultivation novels with harem

MisTeR_BaTH
MisTeR_BaTHLv3MisTeR_BaTH

is there romance for our mc?