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ShadowWind12dコメントShould be 3: Regular Mission One (S grade), Regukar Mission Two ( S grade), and one for completing the five with S grade
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Isn’t it three?!?
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Why is his my down from 99.5 to 92
[Attributes:> Physique: 124.5, Agility: 200, Mentality: 82/99.5, Mana: 91/92.5] - ShadowWind13dコメント
I thought max mana was 99.5
[Attributes:> Physique: 124.5, Agility: 200, Mentality: 99.5, Maximum Mana: 92.5] - ShadowWind23dコメント
Fire?!?! Even though the name of the beast soul is “Thunder” Burst Tiger!?! 🤨
この段落は削除されました。 - ShadowWind24dコメント
Death? Thought it was Chaos
Kim on the other hand, was chosen by the Angel of death and given the number 004, title, The king of the north star. - ShadowWind25dコメント
140??? Shouldn’t it be 190?
Peter divided the 140 students into 14 groups, with ten students in each group. - ShadowWind25dコメント
Lvl 29? I thought he was lvl 40??
この段落は削除されました。 - ShadowWind2mthコメント
Fourfold?? I thought it was onefold?
"I have a feeling that being stuck at the peak of mortal Fourfold for so many years means that my accumulation is sufficient. I'm just a little short of advancing to mortal Fivefold. With the Tempering Elixir you've gifted me, I'm bound to succeed." - ShadowWind2mthコメント
I thought the Mountain and River Marial Soul is the same level as Ling Xiao’s cultivation level, which would be level 2 not 1!!!! Why do these web novels authors stay consistently inconsistent
At the moment, his Mountain and River Martial Soul was at level one. - ShadowWind2mthコメント
When did he become Divine Bravery Stage???
A thunderous roar exploded overhead, it was Chen Zhuang. As a Divine Bravery Stage Martial Artist with unified Essence Qi Spirit, his authority was astonishing, and the sheer force of his shout darkened everyone's vision. The rising anger in the hearts of the people was instantly quelled.detailImmortality Martial Arts: I Started with the Five Animals Health Fist東方 · It's really not Xu Xian - ShadowWind2mthコメントCh 5 I'm Defending the Original Body
- ShadowWind3mthコメント
Weren’t they already lvl 4??
He upgraded the [Underground Cemetery], [Warehouse], [Burial Grounds], [Castle Wall], [Arrow Tower] and [Corridor of the Dead] all to Level 4. - ShadowWind3mthコメント
I thought he said his Lvl is 7 not 6?!?! And you need Lvl 8 to lean sword aura?!?!
Cheng Ming was also equally as surprised. He scratched his head because his own Basic Swordsmanship level was only LV6, which was one level short of the Basic Sword Aura learning requirements. Being the honest person that he was, he reminded Cheng Na awkwardly, "Tutor, I think you forgot that I still can't learn Basic Sword Aura." - ShadowWind4mthに返信 EverGreen
Interesting story. However, grammar and consistency with cultivation realms, character names and pretty much everything is really really bad. Do you plan to rewrite from the beginning? I’m 70 chapters in and it’s very frustrating trying to figure out what’s happening with all of the inconsistencies. I’ll probably drop this and hopefully things get better and try to revisit later down the road.
- ShadowWind5mthコメント
?!?! Quarter Finals should be before the Semi Finals
"With the Semi-finals done, now is the quarter finals and those from the top 19 to 11 rankings would be able to challenge the top ten on the rankings excluding the number one in the rankings. - ShadowWind5mthコメント
4th?!? I thought they were 3rd?
"Kidnapping my daughter and telling me they knew nothing of her whereabouts. Tch, I guess we Amazons have been a little quiet for too long and the world now takes us as soft permission. It's time we show the world just how we manage to rank fourth on the Nine Families ranking..." - ShadowWind5mthコメント
He’s already touching the instructor’s Artic Wolf, why didn’t he get the last 2%??
Before Bai Qi could properly sit, the instructor tapped the Arctic Ice Wolf, and in an instant, the two men and a wolf turned into a streak of light that disappeared from the spot.