The story is well written with good descriptive language that really immerses the reader - l felt like l was in another world. The most impressive thing is the setting - it is very unique and interesting and l can say that l have never read anything like it. The story has great potential and I'll be reading every update when it comes out! The only drawback for me is the fact that the MC feels a bit too OP at the start. He is already at level 0 mortal at 5 years of age yet his sister who is 30 has reached level 3. Maybe the author should slow the progression so that it doesn't feel as though the MC is easily getting through things.
Thieving
9の人に「いいね!」しました
いいね