Thieving

Does he know…?

Why was this important detail, him having a twin brother, skipped in the previous chapter?

His twin is a teenager yet he’s six?…

Sigh. Another novel. Hopefully this one doesn’t bite the dust like the rest of your works.

I share the same sentiments as black dark. Author, you’re doing a lot of telling without showing. Also, this story feels like it’s on fast forward. Reads like a summary. You should slow the pace a little. Cook your story a little bit with some built-up suspense. Show more engagements. Show us his interactions with the world. His state of mind is also strange considering he was just a student in his past life. He shouldn’t be having such willpower to dominate a heaven-defying treasure yet or at least he should “suffer” a little for it. Honestly, I like the premise but just slow down a little. Hope you take this with an open mind.

Thought this book was canned. Good to see.

Don’t be unfortunate. As you can see, it was a lighthearted observation. Not that serious

Yep, the stench of poison is lingering in the air.

Beautiful chapter

This guy is preaching 😂😂