Good Job author first of all, writign can be hard to do. I think the story is good, i liked th eexplosiveness fo the begining, you know revealing that she poisioned him and all, I liked that. I think this is a good story, my only problem with it is grammar, I think if you write in google docs it would point out some of your mistakes which could help. Good Luck!
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