Roonman
Ive watched a lot of anime and a few months back got this really cool idea for an anime, which I then turned into a light novel, and that became a webnovel. Thank you for being here! Destiny is all!
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Roonman3 years agoに返信 Andry_ReyesLmfoa thank you man
- Roonman3 years ago発表
I love how pessimistic the guy is lol, rip his parents though. I think this is an interesting story, especially because it's reincarnation after a tragedy so there's a different kind of incentive for him to change worlds. The grammar and word structures need work because they make the story a little hard to read at times. Good job and keep on writing my dude!
- Roonman3 years agoコメント
same
- Roonman3 years agoコメント
Devil is usually on the left shoulder, so it's interesting he says its on his right
- Roonman3 years ago発表
Good Job author first of all, writign can be hard to do. I think the story is good, i liked th eexplosiveness fo the begining, you know revealing that she poisioned him and all, I liked that. I think this is a good story, my only problem with it is grammar, I think if you write in google docs it would point out some of your mistakes which could help. Good Luck!
- Roonman3 years agoに返信 Yvette_Celia
Thank you! I appreciate very much. Im glad my wiriting was immersive enough!!!
- Roonman3 years agoに返信 WidestGrin
Thats what i was goign for thank you! Though i will try to take your advice and try to cater to the webnovel style more!
- Roonman3 years ago発表
I think that this is a really good novel, i only read a few chapters but everytume i read one it made me want to read the next and the one after it. The world building and character devlopment are great so far. I think you sometimes use words that are unnecessarily advanced, it makes the text feel unnatural. And ofc stability of updates but authors have their own lives to tend, so good luck managing time going further!
- Roonman3 years agoコメント
or it is '46, im not sure now
