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Strong sense of writing! It was a rollercoaster of a concenpt that will bring your emotions to downhill and soon reaching for the horizons! It was a fun read, and I hope this novel blooms! The only thing that I'd like to point out are the sentences in the novel. Although this may be your writing style, but making a sentence short would be preferred than an intricate text. Watch out for those! I added a comment about this to give you an example ^^. best of luck, author! ^^ Can't wait to read more~