Review Detail of Ksenon_Z in In Bleach with a System!
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well, I am reading this book for about month, if not more, and finaly decided to pay a little bit respect to my favorite writer, I really like bleach, but almost all of fanfiction are... not terible but have a low quality, or they are just Mashup with smt else, this is first time then I read not only becouse it's bleach, but becouse it just interesting, not a lot of mistakes, story goes on like in original, but all changes looks good and logical, kuromiya is intersting Mc, waiting for his future performance, all in all I have only 2 questions, for what is system real here, till now it looks like smt which we can just remove with some stoey changes, like he got his powers not from it, but has it already, and his reatsu boost seems like smt unnecessary, and second, is my shrift "B" "The burn ass" why the hell 95% of chapters end with cliffhanger, I know it's a good way to end chapter when it's have no actual ending, but man, that is not only way, chalange yourself and stop making cliff every time you end chapter, I really like your writing, and your cliffs just not helping, I just want to read more, but I can't, it's like giving me a one candy from a large jar with thousands of then, and after that you just place that jar on the frige
In Bleach with a System!
KindaWeirdChampBro
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Go to FF(.)net, go to anime, pick either crossover or sole, find bleach, click all fanfics on top, scroll down and look for sort by setting. Sort by Reviews and then remove the sort by rated G further down below. Congrats. There's your good shit Bleach fiction. Seriously. Especially that one specific Madoka Crossover.
It might be a little hard on the cliffhanger stuff, i kinda like them a bit too much! lmao The system has a purpose, which he isn't telling the MC. I hinted a ton towards it in the early chapters and i have brought up that plot line once again in chapter twenty six. If you notice, whenever Kuromiya made a guess about the system's functions, his death, or the system itself, the system never replied and just allowed him to make his own conclusions. :) That's about it tbh, i'm glad you liked my story!
well, about system I got that in the moment then it talk with... someone, just don't want to include spoilers, it just looks like smt forced, like in that game, when you try to fit cube in triangle hole
KindaWeirdChampBro:It might be a little hard on the cliffhanger stuff, i kinda like them a bit too much! lmao The system has a purpose, which he isn't telling the MC. I hinted a ton towards it in the early chapters and i have brought up that plot line once again in chapter twenty six. If you notice, whenever Kuromiya made a guess about the system's functions, his death, or the system itself, the system never replied and just allowed him to make his own conclusions. :) That's about it tbh, i'm glad you liked my story!