Review Detail of Panqiuyan in Zhoro's Universe:Loose Screws

Item: Zhoro's Universe:Loose Screws
Rating: 3.8

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PanqiuyanLv43yrPanqiuyan

a cool story you wrote. Since there not many chapters I can't see how the story will go. I had a tough time figuring out the setting and you should have a bit more descriptions of places

Zhoro's Universe:Loose Screws

iam_adh

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iam_adh作者iam_adh

I'll take those suggestions in mind. I myself don't like it when I don't have a clear picture of things, so I'll try and be more detailed in upcoming chapters. Thank you for your review!

3yr