Even though there aren't many chapters yet, this has some potential in terms of content because of the "world" the MC is in. In terms of the MC, I won't suggest or change anything about him because, it is your fanfic, not mine. Hopefully, the MC won't be that much of a harem-seeking MC (if he is one) and will go with the flow instead of hunting down women for his harem. I am one of those people who like harems IF they know how to write them correctly so, for me, I hope it would also be like that. Honestly though, I am not a fan of harem that much but I don't hate it, I just don't like it, if it is not written well. Anyway, good luck with your fanfic and hopefully you will continue to write, thank you
I_Am_Not_Siscon
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