DarkTSM

Again though, your version of this Ghost-type specialist of Alola in Kalos is amazing, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. I fully support it!

You know, I won't berate you as this is better than mine but yeah, why do I feel like I've read this before? Then it came to me that it's eerily similar to my fanfic (albeit yours is a lot better than mine seeing that I was 15 when I wrote it) but yeah. You have your own plot and all but I just can't get rid of that feeling that it's the same as mine but VERY different. Never mind this negative rant, it's just that I can't get rid of the "feeling" you know? All in all, it's good fanfic with entertaining segments here and there and I actually enjoyed reading it, so props to you.

Well, looks like I have to use my power stones on this GOLD fanfic every day. :) I can't wait for the future chapters!

You know, at first, I actually liked "H4R3m", but the fact that multiple novels/fanfics destroyed that viewpoint is a sad thing for me. I have seen a few great H4R3m novels but most of them are either finish/dropped. Good thing though that the people who make H4R3m fanfics put a disclaimer that warns the reader that it will be the "Gotta catch them all" type fanfic. Well, that's also my opinion. Now, I don't like harems, but that doesn't stop others from liking them, that's pretty much my point.

Well, it's close enough.

Saiki Kusuo? XD

? Ayaka was already known as a character because she was in CBT 1 (Closed Beta Test), it's not a leak, but yeah, I think I get it.

Hmm, a being similar to Ophis in looks is being used because she wants to find a world to live in. Then the real Ophis from DXD gave power to the Hero Faction because she wanted to regain her silence in the "Dimensional Gap"... COINCIDENCE?! I THINK NOT!

Hey, don't lie to me and say you haven't done the same, lmao

?! FROM THE MOVIE!