I love the concept of this story . By the first episode I was hooked. I had so many questions by the end of the first chapter that it made me want to come back. Now, not to be rude or anything, but as a suggestion try to reread and fix typos . I've also noticed how sometimes the translation was a bit off and how some sentences started with a lowercase letter. Besides those problems, I'm really invested in this story. Keep it up author-nim!
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いいねs8a4o10101:Sorry for those issues you had. As of now I'm working on those problems. I hope I can overcome those problems soon. Thank you for your review.
iam_adh:No problem fam. Either way, I enjoy the story, that's what matters right?