Review Detail of Aeternabilis in [DROPPED] Force User Supplementary System

A couple of the things. I consider myself very knowledgeable about the star wars universe. Star also doesn't revolve around the Force. The Force is a big part but it doesn't revolve around it. Learning lightsaber forms helps keep the story interesting and unique because only learning the Force would just make this a wish fulfilment story which it's not. Also it's not a force system. The full name is Force User SUPPLEMENTARY System. So yeah it can help him with other things too.

A couple of the things. I consider myself very knowledgeable about the star wars universe. Star also doesn't revolve around the Force. The Force is a big part but it doesn't revolve around it. Learning lightsaber forms helps keep the story interesting and unique because only learning the Force would just make this a wish fulfilment story which it's not. Also it's not a force system. The full name is Force User SUPPLEMENTARY System. So yeah it can help him with other things too.

Thanks for the review, spared me the time. And author, star wars does revolve around the force. Every book, every movie is about the force, only in the past 3 years did movies come out not about the force and even then its like a side story. Good luck.

it may not be centered soley on the force but The MC is a force user, Force attument cannot be naturally increased, but LKightsaber forms can be learned the Mc wasting points on something he can learn over something he cannot is just plain dumb. You tried so hard to avoid a wish fufillment you have succeded in doing the exact opposite which is no better

interesting

Thanks for your noble sacrifice saved me the time and energy.

Thanks i was considering reading this, now i know i'll just lose my time

Thanks for saving me the disappointment. With the horrible and dubious webnovel system I have to read the bad reviews because they are usually the real ones or those that have something important (not always, but at least they are more real) and personally all that I write are usually negative

Warriors like you who sacrifice their brain cells to save ours is what's keeping my faith in humanity.

Very harsh dude. I vaguely agree, but it's pretty well written overall. It's mostly just a more light-hearted tone to it. He did have getting a position to earn xp to consider at that point however. And that actually does justify it, since his speed at gaining xp in the temple was atrocious. It has however not yet been confirmed that he can actually train up skills(which is a tad frustrating as an idea, but does sort of balance him out a bit). With the next chapter(26), it seems we will know the answer to this.

Sorry... That doesn't quite hold. He's right, you missed some pretty big things at times. Like the way to Tython being lost, the exacting nature of lightsaber forms, or how the padawans are picked. Still think you're doing a great job on the writing on the overall though. His criticism was rather harsh, and I am rarely one to say that.

You should know that his critique was rather harsh, and that the force is very much in focus if you read just a few more chapters than he did. He merely specced a bit more into lightsaber combat, to get a combat mission oriented master.

Thanks for saving my time. I don't like it when MCs don't take advantage of what they have like an idiot running around the world instead of paying a ticket while obviously having the money to do so.

I would not take the risk and prefer to think you are the author on a alt account.

You'd be wrong, also in the last few chapters he fcked up way too much. I'd no longer recommend it. And I see he stopped writing pretty much with the chapter after those fck ups. But if you wanted proof, you could just check my overall feed, and the many points of critique I gave while reading the story.

Ok, I had a bad feeling about this from the first, I am glad I was right.

a proficient lightsaber dualer, sign me up