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Alien_Space_Bat
Alien_Space_BatLv54yr
2020-06-23 17:03

Another brainless reincarnator...who has a cheat....but only use it, at last time for showing off... there by gathering unwanted attention....i don't even understand this....training doesn't actually improve the skill??only points does??....also storing points...just to use it at last time to make sudden growth.....why not use it up gradually step by step??

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toobadImbatman
toobadImbatmanAuthor

I don't think my my main character should be some super genius, he's just a normal guy who makes normal decisions.

One_Punch_Boyy
One_Punch_BoyyLv10

I don't understand the part of using the points when you have them and not during combat with the fact that he is a genius

toobadImbatman:I don't think my my main character should be some super genius, he's just a normal guy who makes normal decisions.
toobadImbatman
toobadImbatmanAuthor

He's not a genius. I just said that.

One_Punch_Boyy:I don't understand the part of using the points when you have them and not during combat with the fact that he is a genius
haakuman
haakumanLv4

u don’t have to be a genius to think logically lol

toobadImbatman:He's not a genius. I just said that.
One_Punch_Boyy
One_Punch_BoyyLv10

yeah but logic ain't a thing that only genius have

toobadImbatman:He's not a genius. I just said that.
toobadImbatman
toobadImbatmanAuthor

You guys read seven chapters and you think it gives you the expertise to review my book.

One_Punch_Boyy:yeah but logic ain't a thing that only genius have
Roseta_Azmair
Roseta_AzmairLv3

Oh someone is getting salty. You're not even trying too get better,stop getting mad and actually try to listen to people.

toobadImbatman:You guys read seven chapters and you think it gives you the expertise to review my book.
toobadImbatman
toobadImbatmanAuthor

I would if they have constructive criticism but it's just critisim. "MC dumb" helps nobody and the idea that having a ability in lightsaber combat makes is inferior to the Force shows that people have never heard of Darth Bane or Darth Malgus.

Roseta_Azmair:Oh someone is getting salty. You're not even trying too get better,stop getting mad and actually try to listen to people.
Roseta_Azmair
Roseta_AzmairLv3

Question, with the force people are able to teleport, turn intangible. use the elements (fire , water , earth,wind and lightning)with all that, you're saying a lightsaber, not a sniper, can beat someone who is the master of the force.

toobadImbatman:I would if they have constructive criticism but it's just critisim. "MC dumb" helps nobody and the idea that having a ability in lightsaber combat makes is inferior to the Force shows that people have never heard of Darth Bane or Darth Malgus.
toobadImbatman
toobadImbatmanAuthor

Yes and it has happened in the star wars universe before.

Roseta_Azmair:Question, with the force people are able to teleport, turn intangible. use the elements (fire , water , earth,wind and lightning)with all that, you're saying a lightsaber, not a sniper, can beat someone who is the master of the force.
Roseta_Azmair
Roseta_AzmairLv3

I wish we can have this conversation a little better xD. Anyways what about waiting too relocate hes points, that didn't make any since too me, also since he can use the element that mean he can use electromagnetic,gravity, even nuclear, and a lightsaber is better, can you explain?

CalvinTheLeecher
CalvinTheLeecherLv6

Seeing the writer's attitude I am not surprised by the MC's bad decisions, if people drop the story in chapters 7-8 it is because there is a serious problem there, there is nothing more to say. I prefer to see a list of everything bad about the novel before deciding whether to read or not, there I see if it has things that I can bear or give it instadrop

One_Punch_Boyy
One_Punch_BoyyLv10

I wasn't saying that I only wanted to know why? is there a reason?

toobadImbatman:I would if they have constructive criticism but it's just critisim. "MC dumb" helps nobody and the idea that having a ability in lightsaber combat makes is inferior to the Force shows that people have never heard of Darth Bane or Darth Malgus.
toobadImbatman
toobadImbatmanAuthor

Because of caution. With the power he had at the time he could be killed by anyone with a blaster and decent aim. So he kept them in case anything occured that he would need them for. Then when the time came that he needed them he used them.

One_Punch_Boyy:I wasn't saying that I only wanted to know why? is there a reason?
DumplingJr
DumplingJrLv5

I would like to say even though I haven’t read it that I have a serious issue with not using attribute points in video games, its a little pet peave of mine so your argument of not using skill points is invalid ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Roseta_Azmair:I wish we can have this conversation a little better xD. Anyways what about waiting too relocate hes points, that didn't make any since too me, also since he can use the element that mean he can use electromagnetic,gravity, even nuclear, and a lightsaber is better, can you explain?
Roseta_Azmair
Roseta_AzmairLv3

My argument? I was asking a question tho ;-;

DumplingJr:I would like to say even though I haven’t read it that I have a serious issue with not using attribute points in video games, its a little pet peave of mine so your argument of not using skill points is invalid ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
DumplingJr
DumplingJrLv5

Invalid

Roseta_Azmair:My argument? I was asking a question tho ;-;
Roseta_Azmair
Roseta_AzmairLv3

You said "I would like to say even though I haven’t read it that I have a serious issue with not using attribute points in video games, its a little pet peave of mine so your argument of not using skill points is invalid", so you have serious issue with not using attribute points in video games, but my argument of not using skill points is invalid???????? Ok child or drunk hill Billie I have no idea what your talking about.

DumplingJr:Invalid
DumplingJr
DumplingJrLv5

Meh

Roseta_Azmair:You said "I would like to say even though I haven’t read it that I have a serious issue with not using attribute points in video games, its a little pet peave of mine so your argument of not using skill points is invalid", so you have serious issue with not using attribute points in video games, but my argument of not using skill points is invalid???????? Ok child or drunk hill Billie I have no idea what your talking about.
CalvinTheLeecher
CalvinTheLeecherLv6

This, I really do not know anyone who saves their attribute points, maybe the new ones who have not played much, but the habitual ones already know what build to use, I in Grim Dawn, I spent 6 hours reading skills to decide my classes and another 4 in Devotion points. And I say it, I play with permanent death, saving points causes death

DumplingJr:I would like to say even though I haven’t read it that I have a serious issue with not using attribute points in video games, its a little pet peave of mine so your argument of not using skill points is invalid ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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DrHungr3y
DrHungr3yLv5

God I thought this was something great because of the rankings but too bad I was quickly dissapointed. Hmmm, let me see where should I start, ok First is the MC -the author didn't explain anything about the mc or wrote about the mc. Like how did the mc get reincarnated or transmigated to stsr wars. Like who he is before and after transmigating or reincarnating in star wars. Like how did he know anything about star wars. Like how did he get a system. Like why did he get chosen by the system. Like why is he a jedi in training. And I can tell you the mc is extremely idiotic just like the one that wrote it. You get what I mean, the author doesnt explain shts. Second is the system -the system is a fcking trash and a fcking scam. I cant even begin how much of a bullsht the system is, there are a few if not most readers will agree with me(if they arent on the authors side)that the system is just bull**** and useless(just a littlr useless) Third is Yodas speech -god I dont know wtfs wrong with the author on this one he just cut a sentece in half and put the first part in the last part for example, FROM you are chosen by mr. Jedi INTO by mr. Jedi you are chosen god yoda doesnt speak like that I really dont know if the author has watched, read or atleast played star wars. Forth is MCs choice -I quite like how he dealth with the situation of the temple thats a + for me and then he upgraded his lightsaber skills so he cant atleast feel the force thats another + then he upgraded his force power and he earned telekinesis thats another + but then the mc became trash it said the people are schemers but he'll scheme more than them but he couldnt even use the system wisely in the 3 years of his training he didnt use the points and he keeps upgrading his lightsaber skills instead of upgrading his force. So in conclusion this fanfic isnt worth reading well that is if you're a dumb fck who cant even notice the obvious mistakes here and support the author who isnt doing anything to fix the mistakes the readers are reading which is extremely obvious so us couole of readers are trying to advice him but sadly stubborn fcks like this sht here isnt gonna move up the society like a trash(like me)

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