Roseta_Azmair

You're right about there aren't any other good criticism, I must of been going crazy and thought I saw more my mistake, I'm sorry for that, but saying I couldn't please everyone isn't a writers words, those are words of defeat and just sound dismissive, but again I'm sorry

I was more talking about your attitude for the original comment, where you had dismissed his criticism, you also did that for a few others where it wasn't them being rude as well.

That says a lot more about the other fanfics then anything, but that isn't a surprise since most of them are Chinese fanfics that have been translated, and most people are bored of that trope at this point, it also say's a lot more about you, if you can't even take legit criticism and improve enough to surpass them.

Didn't he reincarnate? How old did he die 10?

Noooooo, I didn't know you were going to update today, if I did I would of saved me stones!!!!!! This is my favorite fanfic rn omg THIS IS PEAK.

Someone woke up cranky and instead of using there words to describe, all they can do write is one word negatively. Since it seems your brain isn't working rn, I'll give you options you can use instead of being a hateful child, 1. Stop reading this story 2. Stop reading this story while giving legit criticism 3. Stop reading this story and take a nap. Hopefully you are able to read this and take my advise

Girls are also perverts, it's not perversion that's the problem, it's how he went about it, do you want someone who you barely know peeping on you, making rude commits or gesture with his hands? I don't mind others looking at me for a bit, but if you stare for a long time that is on you, you could of looked away anytime.

As a Therapist, I think you should get off the internet for a while, it has deuterated your mind way to much that your rational thought has began to decline, he made perfect sense that if you couldn't even understand that *sad sigh*.

Shadow clones once dispersed, the clone's experiences and remaining chakra are transferred back to the user, so I would think so, it makes a lot more sense compared to a lot of other stuff tbh

If I give it my full attention and have nothing else going on? Easily 200