Review Detail of DarkTSM in The Rise of the Lazy Mage(Versatile mage FF)

Item: The Rise of the Lazy Mage(Versatile mage FF)
Rating: 5

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DarkTSMLv24yrDarkTSM

Hello author, I know i am just being selfish but can you assure atleast for me that this won't be a harem and if it is please limit it to 2-3... but i hope it does not come to that. I am just waiting for another semi fluff chapter... yes, I am weird... Oh, in regards to the fanfic, Its good in most cases. I don't mean its bad but i get tired of those familiars/pets transforming loli cliches... They are like little sisters at first then they suddenly become a harem candidate and I am tired of that... But hey its your story minus Quanzhi fashi. Good luck on making this story a good one.

The Rise of the Lazy Mage(Versatile mage FF)

Dato

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Dato作者Dato

If I do harem it will only be around 1-2 other girls and they will most likely come from multiverse which I plan to do in the future. Thanks for the feedback

4yr

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Harem make it 3-4

4yr

DarkTSMLv2DarkTSM

Hi author, just making sure. I am having a weird feeling that he would get a harem member earlier than I expected soooooo, would he really get one of his classmates as one? Well if that really is the case then, yeah, no. But that is just my opinion, why? The only reason his girl classmates "like" him is because of his power and his looks which is very cliche in chinese novels so if you really want to add a person to his harem make sure he has some "real development" scene with said person

Dato:If I do harem it will only be around 1-2 other girls and they will most likely come from multiverse which I plan to do in the future. Thanks for the feedback

4yr

Dato作者Dato

Nope just adding a bit of fluff to the story

DarkTSM:Hi author, just making sure. I am having a weird feeling that he would get a harem member earlier than I expected soooooo, would he really get one of his classmates as one? Well if that really is the case then, yeah, no. But that is just my opinion, why? The only reason his girl classmates "like" him is because of his power and his looks which is very cliche in chinese novels so if you really want to add a person to his harem make sure he has some "real development" scene with said person

4yr

DarkTSMLv2DarkTSM

I HAVE A NEW GOD (I AIN'T RELIGIOUS EVEN THOUGH I AM CATHOLIC) PRAISE AUTHOR-SAN/KUN OR ANY HONORIFIC

Dato:Nope just adding a bit of fluff to the story

4yr