Review Detail of GodOfWriting in The Rise Of The Sovereign Sun

Author review here, below I will have a detailed explanation of how I reviewed my own work in an attempt to be partial as possible(lol its probably still not). I just wanted to use this to say that I do hope that even if you hate my writing you at least tell me why, although telling me why you love it is also nice :) ------- Writing Quality Stars: +2 Grammar, Spelling | +1 Varied words| +1 Descriptive, but not obnoxiously so| -1 Overuse of names(fixing that soon, as of ch 50) Stability of Updates: I update at the speed of light considering the difficulty of and level of work I put into writing this. Story Development: +1 Changes in Characters Throughout Chapters|+1 World moves in the background as time passes| +1 Main plot steadily advances| -1 I introduced too many chars then left them alone for too long(fixing again have no fear)| -1 couldnt think of another good point lol Character Design: Each important character has their own unique backstory, motivations, and world view(based on how they grew up and of major events) that will slowly be revealed as the story progresses! World Background: Multiple overarching plots that will slowly make themselves known as the story progresses as well as the 100 pages of world information I wrote in preparation for this.. time will tell how well I find ways to translate that into writing but I have a few plans.