The Rise Of The Sovereign Sun

This is a really good prologue, the quality of writing is way better than most stories on this site, the characters feel more real and more human than most on this site, and the world is pretty unique. Alot of the world building was done very well. This is definitely worth the read and I hope that the author will continue to post more chapters, he already got my attention and I will continue to read if they are willing to post.

A wonderful story with very detailed world building, a unique power ranking, and a extremely hard working author. The book isn’t fast paced but follows the growth of the MC lesson by lesson, and if you don’t like the short chapters at the beginning they lengthen towards the middle. Really looking forward to diving into this world and seeing the plot develop! Also another great thing is chapters are pumped out quickly don’t know how the author does it! Recommend to anyone who likes magic novels

I don't normally write reviews, but this hard working author deserves all the praise he can get. The story has good world building, fleshed out characters and a good pace. The writing is also top quality. Even though some chapters can be short, the bulk release easily make up for it. I really recommend everyone to at least give it a try, you won't regret it.

Before anything, I wish to say that this is an amazing novel. The quality of the writing is good to say the least. The world seems interesting, with a country that I am interested in learning the backstory of. The characters are well thought, and at least for me, the main character is someone who presents a lot of opportunities for the future. He is different to most, he is flawed, but he is clearly developing to fix that flaw, he has issues he is aware of, and understands what he has to do to solve them. Brilliant work, congratulations for the fantastic story.

The novel has a very interesting world setting. The planet has its own will . It bestows powers on all individuals when coming of age to fight external threats . Ofc this does not mean every individual have the opportunity to make use of them. You have the privileged and the disadvantaged. Many don't have the proper background to make use of their gift . Some are simply killed for various reasons . Either way , it emulates the status of our real world. The will of the planet doesn't care whether someone is being unjustly treated or not as long as they don't cross the boundaries it has set. At the same time it pays special attention to unique individuals who show promise in helping it defend itself and also those who seem dangerous. The MC is from the wasteland(a terrible place to live where warlords rule the place) but has a chance encounter with a mage who takes him in due to something unique the mage sees in him. The MC is given the opportunity to visit the empire which rarely anyone from the wasteland gets to do . MC also gets the constant attention of the will of the planet . The empire is where the real story begins and it is for sure an exciting one when add in his interactions with the will of the planet . So be sure to check the novel out!! I am sure you won't regret it!

The novel is extremely well written, the style of the writing is different to what you may be used to, but in my opinion it adds to the individuality of the story, as well as fitting quite well with the characters and world. The combat is extremely detailed, each character fighting in their own way. I am truly looking forward to reading more. Congratulations on such a good novel!

Author review here, below I will have a detailed explanation of how I reviewed my own work in an attempt to be partial as possible(lol its probably still not). I just wanted to use this to say that I do hope that even if you hate my writing you at least tell me why, although telling me why you love it is also nice :) ------- Writing Quality Stars: +2 Grammar, Spelling | +1 Varied words| +1 Descriptive, but not obnoxiously so| -1 Overuse of names(fixing that soon, as of ch 50) Stability of Updates: I update at the speed of light considering the difficulty of and level of work I put into writing this. Story Development: +1 Changes in Characters Throughout Chapters|+1 World moves in the background as time passes| +1 Main plot steadily advances| -1 I introduced too many chars then left them alone for too long(fixing again have no fear)| -1 couldnt think of another good point lol Character Design: Each important character has their own unique backstory, motivations, and world view(based on how they grew up and of major events) that will slowly be revealed as the story progresses! World Background: Multiple overarching plots that will slowly make themselves known as the story progresses as well as the 100 pages of world information I wrote in preparation for this.. time will tell how well I find ways to translate that into writing but I have a few plans.

Probably the best book i have read on this site to be honest. The MC is great and everchanging with unique quirks. The supporting cast while intially cliche is more than meets the eye. No complaints about grammar. The setting is quite nice as well, with the overall world being quite in depth. The progression of power is slow but not to the point that it detracts. Overall its a great book, hopefully the author comes back to grace us with more chapters.

This is a very good novel with tons of detailed world-building, great character development, and a wonderful story. The chapters started out a little on the short side but became longer as the author pumped more out. I really recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys fantasy, you won’t regret it.

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This book is very interesting and has a fantasy plot that most people wanna experience one day. Although there are small chapters in the beginning, the length becomes longer in further chapters. I hope you can read this book and experience the journey the main character goes through. Please support this author and his upcoming books <3

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