Review Detail of Hentai_Senchou in VR System In Walking Dead. (dropped)

Dropped on chapter 6. The first nine chapters, quotation marks are used LITERALLY twice... And it's only when people are thinking two 5 word sentences... He doesn't even use a ',(,[,{,:. Literally anything that can differentiate the narration that tells us what happened and the dialogue. The only thing you will get is (character name) after some long a$$ dialogue and narration literally touching the dialogue sometimes. So its impossible to confirm if it's dialogue unless you skip to the end of it to read the name of the character talking. Author said that he's going to change it starting on chapter 9, but since he didn't understand how quotation marks are supposed to be used until he got bombarded in the comments, I don't trust him to use them right moving forward. Author, reply to me if you ever decide to fix the earlier chapters and I will delete my review, try the story again, and at the very least give ste story a one star better review