Review Detail of Inferno_Vor in Omni-Gamer

The formating is okay, but the author makes some glaring mistakes, grammar is mostly correct from what I noticed or at least no some dumb mistakes like he/she or something similar, but I could've glossed over them. The updates are stable. The story is kinda slow and you don't get to the start until the 6th chapter and it's all over the place, the MC is just thrown into the world without any rhyme or reason, just your friendly goddess decided to take his soul and make him her champion but won't/can't explain anything... Just go and spread my word my faithful minion... The interactions feel like game prompts, eg. Who are you? I am the goddess of games. Why am I here? I can't explain but you are chosen as my champion good luck. The characters aren't developed it's too short for the type of story the author chose, barely any development or sense to the characters or what's going on. The world just isn't there the MC gets yoinked out of his world into another in like 3 paragraphs, dies, meets goddess, is champion in a new world...