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Omni-Gamer

作者: Belial2122
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What is Omni-Gamer

WebNovel で公開されている、Belial2122 の作者が書いた Omni-Gamer の小説を読んでください。A boy who transmigated to another worldThis is my first time writing a novel and English is not my main language.Disclaimer: I don't own any of the anime ,manga and games this was inspired of growth c...

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A boy who transmigated to another world This is my first time writing a novel and English is not my main language. Disclaimer: I don't own any of the anime ,manga and games this was inspired of growth cheat and gamer. I will also add other ideas of animes and mangas.

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On the outer reaches of human controlled space was planet Eddok, the planet was unexplored with a high chance of sentient life. There was a scheduled check for life within the next decade though anyone involved with the order was not expecting anything from the large green planet other than new plants and animals. Sure it could result in trillions of dollars but only a few people knew about this new planet and most of them were from the military, so the planet, for now, went unnoticed. Above planet Eddok a ripple of energy tore through space before a silver beam of energy blasted down to the planet's surface. On a military installation that was in charge of this sector, an alarm began to scream. First Lieutenant Dan Orland ran from the mess hall back to his station, looking down he typed in the access codes and read the report. His eyebrows rose and he quieted the alarms, he wrote a quick report and left for the captains quarters. “Lieutenant Dan! Report!” came the captain voice just as the lieutenant came towards the office, he quickened his steps and entered he closed the door behind himself and saluted. “Sir, a large mass of energy just appeared over Eddok, a third of the sensors in that area were destroyed but whatever it was ripped a hole in space and shot towards the planet, the exact coordinates couldn't be confirmed but we have the general location.” The captain took the report from his lieutenant and skimmed the files, “Good work, how soon will our landing vessel arrive?” “Originally Sir it would take another eight years, but we can shorten it to three, the vessel that was sent is a new model that was going to be testing the new engines hence why it was going to take longer. If we order them to rush the output of the engines should get them there within that time frame.” Sitting back down in his chair the captain attached the report to his console and added in the new orders for the ship that was inbound to Eddok and increasing the danger level of the mission, he dismissed the lieutenant and made a call to his superiors.

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Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

The formating is okay, but the author makes some glaring mistakes, grammar is mostly correct from what I noticed or at least no some dumb mistakes like he/she or something similar, but I could've glossed over them. The updates are stable. The story is kinda slow and you don't get to the start until the 6th chapter and it's all over the place, the MC is just thrown into the world without any rhyme or reason, just your friendly goddess decided to take his soul and make him her champion but won't/can't explain anything... Just go and spread my word my faithful minion... The interactions feel like game prompts, eg. Who are you? I am the goddess of games. Why am I here? I can't explain but you are chosen as my champion good luck. The characters aren't developed it's too short for the type of story the author chose, barely any development or sense to the characters or what's going on. The world just isn't there the MC gets yoinked out of his world into another in like 3 paragraphs, dies, meets goddess, is champion in a new world...

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Thiago_guedes
Thiago_guedesLv11Thiago_guedes

stop treating strangers as acquaintances, you just forgot your family on earth, calling a stranger a father and a stranger a sister, even if you have received memories from them, that is not logical.

MikeAlva
MikeAlvaLv14MikeAlva

I hope you give us more chapters soon. Good job with the story. Since i don't know what more to said ...................... ........................................168

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