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LordSputnik
LordSputnikLv134yrLordSputnik

Honest Review Only 11 chapters so far, but it was able to draw me in so I've added it to my collection. The Good: Believable characters, the system is not OP like so many other systems, and the world building was done subtly enough so as not to feel like a lore dump, something I need to learn how to do better! The Bad: Nothing terribly bad honestly, the only thing that bugged me was the extreme plot convenience about getting robbed as he just happens to finally tell the story about getting robbed years ago. The Neutral: Maybe I missed it, but why does everyone appear differently than their usual self in the war?

Soul War: Journey to a new life

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Thanks for the review! Yes it does feel convenient but I had to advance the plot since the main part really starts at the 5th chapter. It is my first novel ever, and I will try to improve as much as I can. Really appreciate the honesty.