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Soul War: Journey to a new life

作者: Spajk
Fantasy
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  • 16 章
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  • 4.7
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What is Soul War: Journey to a new life

WebNovel で公開されている、Spajk の作者が書いた Soul War: Journey to a new life の小説を読んでください。After the death of his wife Leon was never the same. He dedicated his life to his grandchildren, and spent the rest of his time mostly in seclusion, hiding his feelings and regrets from the rest of hi...

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After the death of his wife Leon was never the same. He dedicated his life to his grandchildren, and spent the rest of his time mostly in seclusion, hiding his feelings and regrets from the rest of his family. Now, he is given a chance to right a wrong, and meet his wife again, but the road will not be easy, bordering impossible. Follow his magical journey, as he tries to overcome a plethora of mythical creatures, heroes and demons alike, as well as other souls in order to fulfill his heart’s only desire.

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Chu Feng transmigrates to a fantasy world only to realize that he’s a handsome but useless man who’s marrying into the family of Ji Rui, a capable woman of very high cultivation level. He quickly falls for his beautiful fiancee only to find out that she just wants to maintain a fake marriage to appease her powerful father, Ji Zheng. He finally finds himself in a situation that he would usually find in novels upon getting married—he is blessed with the Divine-level Son-in-law Freeloader System. The irreverent system rewards him with mysterious gift packs and rare treasures for his efforts in completing missions, resulting in him quickly advancing from an ordinary person to a cultivator. Ironically, Ji Zheng becomes more powerful due to a treasure Chu Feng receives from the system, which culminates in Ji Rui becoming the supreme leader of the four major sects in the world. However, opposing forces remain lurking in the shadows and Ji Zheng decides that a special treasure is required to aid Ji Rui in her ultimate advancement in cultivation. In her search for this rare treasure, a stranger from afar comes with information of a cryptic ravine that splits the Purgatory Sea into two. She decides to follow the stranger and brings Chu Feng with her on the dangerous trip to the faraway Purgatory Sea which teems with itinerant cultivators, demonic beasts, and valuable treasures. When they run into a life-threatening situation, Chu Feng says to Ji Rui, "My instinct is to protect you." She is amazed with this man in front of her. Why would this weak and useless man want to save her when he knows that their marriage is only a sham? What should she do with this husband of hers? What would happen to their relationship when they find the special treasure?

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GinKishi
GinKishiLv2GinKishi

So far, the novel seems really good. Writing quality is excellent, i haven't found any glaring mistakes that will take you out of the SW world. Updates are also regular (so far), and story development is going nicely. Character design is also great so far, and Soul War world has really intrigued me. I think this novel has a potential to become something great and rich with lore. I definitely recommend this to anyone who likes fantasy novels with game elements.

kazesenken
kazesenkenLv3kazesenken

This is a well written story, which I have a hard time finding flaws in. From the beginning, the reader is drawn to the MC on a personal level. I can pretty much visualize what he sees and how he feels. The world building and character introductions are done at a nice pace, and the system is introduced in a way that makes sense. I applaud how you have structured your beginning in a way that makes it easy to follow. The only thing that felt off was how much younger the MC felt in his thoughts and actions. Not sure how to portray that well either, but maybe we can chalk it up to how the MC's core personality is. I truly found the basis of your novel to be captivating, and the execution to be superb. I left you some comments of what I was thinking as I read. You have my honest recommendation!

Miroslav_Lalovic
Miroslav_LalovicLv2Miroslav_Lalovic

This story genre is my cup of tea and u did a good job making the world and its characters, love the little cliffhangers at the end of each chapter and cant wait for more to come !

Loyalscum
LoyalscumLv13Loyalscum

I love this story absolutely amazing i need more of it. But i do have one problem i can not for the life of me figure out what was going through the robbers heads. The first robbery gone wrong resulted in him killing a woman for a ring then for the hell of it he also burnt their hows down. The second one is robbing people at the cemetery in full view of a cop who immediately notices the guy after first shot. Why are both robbers psychiatric? First guy was not a robber he was an arsonist the secong guy was just roming the grave yard hanging out with his other friend looking to add another to the group when he heard the old mans story and act the part of the robber to give the old man the chance to risk his life for someone else like he always wanted. That second robber was a good Samaritan i would even go as far to call him a hero. This was a review swap please check out my book if you wanna join the dark side its called unusual world. https://***.webnovel.com/book/15094015305771305/Unusual-world

ShinSungmi
ShinSungmiLv4ShinSungmi

Interesting Concept! Although I don't read this genre, the plotline seemed intriguing, and the writing style is amazing as well! Keep up with the good work!

Kraashe
KraasheLv1Kraashe

Good job to the author!! The character development was very consistent and not fast paced. I don't really like those novels where the mc goes from weak then found some treasures and boom!! Became immediately OP. Thankfully, this ones a good fresh of air.

Abdirah101
Abdirah101Lv5Abdirah101

Great story, so far! Not only are there a few grammar mistakes, but there is also good character development, and a 'usual' world! Can't wait for this novel to grow and mature.

LordSputnik
LordSputnikLv13LordSputnik

Honest Review Only 11 chapters so far, but it was able to draw me in so I've added it to my collection. The Good: Believable characters, the system is not OP like so many other systems, and the world building was done subtly enough so as not to feel like a lore dump, something I need to learn how to do better! The Bad: Nothing terribly bad honestly, the only thing that bugged me was the extreme plot convenience about getting robbed as he just happens to finally tell the story about getting robbed years ago. The Neutral: Maybe I missed it, but why does everyone appear differently than their usual self in the war?

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OJROMANCE
OJROMANCELv4OJROMANCE

Story started as a fantasy but changed after a few chapters. Grammar is not the strong side of the novel, but plot seems interesting enough to attract readers. Chapter length varies but updates are getting stable. With a little bit of proofreading it will become way better.

BlackCarapace
BlackCarapaceLv5BlackCarapace

good story. easy to read. grammars were good. good idea. the problem was the mc was too old. LOL. old spirit!

Gugubird
GugubirdLv3Gugubird

Good stuff came from the forums to check out your work. I hope that you will check out mine. Really impressed with the way you wrote your story.

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