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ArgosYesu
ArgosYesuLv154yr
2020-02-17 02:25

Although I like the story and concept, I do feel it’s a bit receptive.. at least after 90 chapters you have two arcs where the “heroine” is shown to actually be villainous or bad. At least the male lead in the second arc was a straight-laced guy, though he’s also a closet asshole with women... just feels a bit lazy so I didn’t bother paying past the second arc.

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CloudyAlliance
CloudyAllianceLv5

I'm truly impressed with this one. I love quick transmigration stories and this is my first seeing one with a male mc, I won't talk about spoiling the story, but I will say that the first arc is very powerful, well thought and characters are all fleshed out properly, no seriously I still have lingering attachment with the characters, and I want the mc to continue living in that world, but when I start reading the second arc boom! I think it's now my favorite, character interactions are just interesting and lifelike. Well even though I loved this story I will be professional since this is a review so I will still have to say cons that I saw to help author sama and some readers. About the thing I say about lingering attachment about first arc is true, and I think the author is to be blamed(seriously) even though it's just a trial but I think Author haven't closed the story very well, ahem sorry for this little spoiler, I seriously thought that the time Traveller girl would be a love interest since I get the fate vibes but I was left in a cliffhanger since he suddenly left in the middle of a "date" (If you already plan the mc to return to previous world then I won't say anymore but if not please consider giving the girl justice by giving her a chapter dedicated only for her.) Even though this story is not that kind of genre the mc should have take his mission seriously and thought more about it, considering he will be dealing with "villainess" he should at least fortify his physical self defense and since he has a goal he should at least be more proactive into preparation since the system doesn't say that it will be always modern world he will be transmigrated in and I always think in real life that what is given can also be taken if he fail his mission his goal might just pop into nothingness unless this saving world from villainess is just farse and failing from preventing villainess to cause harm and death will have no consequences or punishment. Well that's for my review even with the cons I still love this story so I'm giving it 5 stars, cuz also knew that a novel is always a novel and never will be reality that's why inconsistency and lack of data would be always present.

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