Fallen Blue your story is amazing ,its kept me glued to the screen the entire time , the various contexts and scenarios you put the main character in are really interesting ,and how he reacts to with his very snappy slightly crazily personality is both relatable and hilarious .
But I just one Feedback is that even though the stoires in the latets arca are still good and high quality Jiang Li has become a bit too passive as a character .
I miss the jiang Li in the first and second arc ,He was extremely crazy psychopath ,destroyed everything in his path ,like an anti hero , however he was still a very good man deep in his heart which is shown through his action to his hosts bodies families etc.
He was a very intruiging character and following his journey and antics always gave me the alderaline rush as well as food for thought as well.
However I feel that quality of being deeply intruiging with so many layers ,as well his almost pychopathic way of dealing with hurdles in the plot and the various act of kindness he gives to characters insignificat to the plot but which in reality add so much more whichwas really amazing , is no longer as much potrayed ,which kind of makes me feel bad .
Also though the depictions of his personality is till quite good and high quality writing , I feel it would be better if you were to make him a tad bit more selfish ,in that he priorties his needs and desires a bit more , because if he just becomes a character who exists too make a villanese happy his character quickly becomes bland and unrelatable .
I just wanted say also that for some reason his personality keeps reminding of lelouch from code geass.
Also I just wanted to also say that I really want to know what is up with that witch lady and that man in the white robe ,itwould be awesome if the plot become more focused onto their mystery , I assume the witch is part of the main plot .
Also is it possible for you to introduce Jiang Li to other tranmigrators,
you know maybe there is a centre for transmigrators just like in Cannon foodder counterattck were transmigartors are called task takers instead,
Also while the male and female lead of each world will be minor villains or antagonists for Jiang Li can you make a Major antagonist for Jiang Li ,
like a master mind Boss Villian who indentends to destroy the multiverse for some warpped plan ,it can possibly even be a anotther transmigartor or task takers who is Jiang Li s, enemy .
Also if Jiang Li faced more hurdles like that of HIV infection he contrcated form the host body in the second world ,and other struglless which take a toll emotionally on Jiang Li ,it would be really good to see more angst in the web novel in the future ,and I alwlove to see how Jiang Li overcomes his angst.
anway that was my review ,I love your story do far and I hope my feedback helps you keep writing a better more refined story in the future .Thank you so much for this amazing story Fallen Blue author nim
