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Lv13

Char Govinda. I will be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com

2017-06-06 入りましたCanada
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791.8h

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  • char
    char3mth
    コメント

    Bro flexed 😂

    Pei Xuanjing pacified his true Qi and waved his hand, saying, "I am Pei Xuanjing. Mr. Shen, there's no need for that. Encountering injustice on the road and extending a helping hand is what we, martial artists, do."
    The Sims: I Open the Immortal Path for All Beings
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  • char
    char10mth
    に返信 omnikinesis

    I know the feeling, I have been an avid reader myself, before I started to write. You can see I had many endeavours, before this AI wave came. My intention was to let it assist me, but I guess the human touch was lost somewhere between the paragraphs, and now that I reread the story, there is so much unnecessary inner monologues. But thank you to your honest review, or else I would have written 100 more chapters and wouldn't realise why people were not noticing my novel lol.

    Orion's Odyssey - The New Dawn
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  • char
    char10mth
    に返信 omnikinesis

    Thank you for your honest review. I used the AI to rewrite my base chapters, and that is the problem I suppose. I will be rewriting all the chapters and get that human touch.

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  • char
    char10mth
    に返信 Sojuuuus

    Because he has “bigger” plans. Read on brother ✌🏼

    Ch 31 Departure
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  • char
    char10mth
    に返信 Ventallion

    "Little did I know, I would get caught..."

    Ch 17 Shopping
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  • char
    char10mth
    に返信 Ventallion

    It is xD

    Ch 21 Dinner
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  • char
    char11mth
    発表

    Writing a self review here. 45 Chapter in now. Please review the work and provide feedback peeps. Need it to stay motivated. And if you like it, share the story xD. Peace Out.

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  • char
    char11mth
    に返信 ChenChenChenChen

    Sure, do update the review. And I will keep on writing!

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  • char
    char11mth
    に返信 SupraID

    Thank you for the reply!

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  • char
    char11mth
    に返信 ChristinaHalden

    Thank you for the reply!

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  • char
    char11mth
    に返信 Rana_Dughabati

    Thank you for the reply!

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  • char
    char11mth
    に返信 AndyShriller

    Thank you!

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  • char
    char11mth
    に返信 GOVinda2

    Thank you!

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  • char
    char11mth
    に返信 Apfelkuchen18

    Thank you! I will keep updating. Keep supporting xD

    Ch 19 Homecoming (2)
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  • char
    char1yr
    に返信 ILovemyself_84

    Do share your thoughts after reading xD

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  • char
    char1yr
    に返信 Laughing_Fox_9871

    Thank you for the review. Yes, the worldbuilding needs some work, I agree. I have the broad sense of the world, but the nitty-gritty details need to be worked out for sure. I will work on it for sure.[img=recommend]

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  • char
    char1yr
    に返信 Dotencsure

    1

    The Great Genetic Era
    東方 · Pig Sanbu
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  • char
    char1yr
    コメント

    took him a long time to think abt this

    Since the Spiritual Map Space was so magical, why don't he plant some vegetables inside? Even if it wasn't for the sake of earning money, it would be good to improve his meals occasionally! The vegetables grown in the Spiritual Map Space would definitely be much better than the vegetables sold in the market!
    God-tier Farm
    都市 · Gentleness In A Steel Gun
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  • char
    char1yr
    コメント

    here comes our chea...

    Xia Ruofei did not realize that while he was rummaging, a drop of blood dripped from the wound on his arm and landed on an unassuming scroll in the box.
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  • char
    char1yr
    コメント

    bhindi

    That was the okra.
    I Can Enter The Game
    都市 · Ask The Heart Forever
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