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Sergiu_Chirita_3966

Sergiu_Chirita_3966

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2024-10-27 入りましたGlobal
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  • Sergiu_Chirita_3966
    Sergiu_Chirita_39664 months ago
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    I agree. I'm currently on chapters 22-23, and I can't say that these are face slap situations in the literal sense, but I think there are too many moments where the main character faces situations where he's underestimated and boasts about how great he is. Especially in chapter 23, where he's on a date with an older woman, but he behaves like an impulsive teenager just to set up a situation where he can show off his status as a restaurant owner.

  • Sergiu_Chirita_3966
    Sergiu_Chirita_39664 months ago
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    Author, this is starting to get annoying. Not every action of the main character needs to be a face slap situation; there needs to be balance. At first, it was fine, but when there are such situations in every chapter, and sometimes two in a single chapter, it becomes boring and repetitive. It’s becoming more of a cliché than it already is, making it hard to read.