I loved the sequence of events and character building I also loved this world that makes her great , its great keep going [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

I loved this work and I loved the way the character was written and built and included in the world of the story. Well done and keep going ✍

I loved the way the characters were written and the approach taken in presenting the events, and the story is developing, which is wonderful. Well done, keep going 🙌🏻😍

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Thank you for your advice. I will try to introduce new skills to the hero as the days go by, and my honesty will be impressed in the end because I plan for John to become an unexpected person who connects several worlds.

Thank you for your opinion. I will follow your advice . I hope you will like the second chapter 🙌🏻🤍

I love these moments

Guys Do you want the 2 chapter? [img=update]

Guys, the next chapters will be long. I just want your opinion. Should I continue?