It's too slow for you, the other likes it, but I believe the former can't notice details.

Worry not. I myself am a proponent of the idea that if there is no change in storyline, an author shouldn't even try to write a fanfiction.

Hope you like Naruto fanfictions. I'll come back to this piece as soon as I add my second fanfic here.

And so, for the record, I graduated from law school. About the vocabulary.

I actually like being called an artificial intelligence. It's an insult to huge corporations that spend billions of dollars and create programs that end up making a lot of mistakes, because you can see that I have no logical inaccuracies. And praising my skills you do by saying such words. And to get to the point, have you guys really never seen an AI work? I realized the level of development of these technologies when I saw the first pictures of sofas without legs. Especially in aspects of magic and skills, these AIs have never once produced something decent, and here are such charges. Well, and of course on the insult issue. I spend 3 months to create 100 chapters for my fanfic, so why the duck would I do that when a program can do the same thing in a few minutes? The answer is the same as before, these AIs don't exist if we're talking about their ability to produce a proper product. Oh, and before I forget, you're right with “chatgpt is strong with this one”. Why can't AI do the same for other people and only do it for me?

as far as I can tell you're not George either, and if you don't have the brains to read a chapter and consider it AI, then I feel sorry for your teachers who wasted their time on a mediocrity like you. people complain that I have too much realism, and the dumb brick can't realize that this is the aspect where artificial intelligence gives itself away all the time, because AI can't feel the cause and effect relationship.

my bad, and thank you :)

With that i can do nothing. This fanfiction gonna be based on logic and common sense, without delusional passing of need to be actions and necessities

godfall and the economic development you mentioned are a bit irrelevant, but I can't answer your question in that way as it would be spoilers. I already have the events planned out and the only thing left to do is to fit them in and write them out in chapters.

no strange or fictional creatures, purely magical approach.

Won't it be boring to read about OP character? Reading other works sometimes it seems that MCs act irrationally and must have problems and needs that are overlooked. I try to make the text as realistic as possible, but apparently people only want blasts of skills and 18+ perverted content.

what are your thoughts, should I continue or am I wasting my time?

working on it, but to tell the truth, its the way i speak and write :( I'm gradually simplifying them, and after finishing with chapters 7 to 14, i will continue to add all the new chapters that have been completed so far. I am a bit of a man of old writing, but it seem people don't like it that way.

In a way, you're right, I was a little hasty. Look at the first 6 chapters, I spent the last 4 hours fixing and adding some details, but that's saying something else, the release of the new twenty chapters will be delayed for a few days, because I wanted to post them today, but I think it's better to complete it properly. It's all about translation, it's hard enough to convey all the colorful turns of phrase of my native language in English.

The very first chapter baffled you that much? I'm not even gonna guess, you haven't read Martin's original, have you? :)

Guys, what are your thoughts so far, is the style not overly complex or overly veiled?

yea, you should do that. read chinese works or other things that allow you to see half of the plot and all of the hero's achievements to the end on the third chapter. only the patient ones gonna get why i add every detail and try my best to do something decent.

And also, of course, every MC should know about the world he gets into. Otherwise, what's the point of writing about a fellow traveler at all. Isn't it better to write something of your own and not annoy people?

MC only knows the Game of Thrones part, for many are too lazy to read a work that Martin has complicated with such a unique literary style that is not often used by authors. Especially since this is a professional player, which means that as such he doesn't have much time to read something that is hard to get and not loved by him. I will try to use very little of what is expressed in ASOIAF, again for the reason that not everyone has read and may get confused. Accordingly, if he has not read, but only interested in the series, then like any other not too ardent fan he knows about 80-90% of the plot details, forgetting extremely small parts. I'll be honest, I've been looking at the stats, and they're not rosy. Many, prior to the release of Game of Thrones couldn't even understand half of the text accurately. It wasn't until Martin himself highlighted the most important elements and removed everything unnecessary for the series, eliminating the element of seeing the world from the perspective of particular characters.

what can i say to my reader, was going to add them tomorrow, but it seems i have to do it now)