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Naughty_J2dに返信 FallenAngeIChanged the paragraph to them being in a relationship. Doesn't change anything really
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I don't agree with you at all, and I don't really see another way to write this
"I also don't mind it. Just promise me that you'll love me just as much as the other girls you'll have around you." - Naughty_J2dに返信 FallenAngeI
Meh, I guess it's a working relationship. Still, he said that to make it easier for them to handle him fooling around with multiple women. They are pretty much in a relationship. There's just no label on it.
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The manager can decide how he wants to handle things.
He needed to make sure that the two of them had no idea about the fact that they had intimate relationships. It would be extremely hard, and Darius honestly had no idea how that would be even possible. Still, he had chosen a good table for that as they would be sat in a triangle. - Naughty_J3dに返信 Asagrim_9
That's her personality
She practically shouted that as the people within the restaurant all turned their heads in their direction. They had clearly heard the words that she had just chosen. - Naughty_J5dに返信 Certavus
Thank you, I fixed both the mistakes you mentioned.
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Her boyfriend
Darius put a hand on Avery's thigh as he said that, and because of what happened back in her bedroom. She had little to no reaction, as if him touching her was totally normal. Still, when Darius looked over toward Liam, he could see the frown on his face. He didn't like his girlfriend being touched in front of him. His mouth was closed, though, his jaw clenching. - Naughty_J9dに返信 Lucky0_0
None, it's a fictive one.
[Goddess Ariel's Shop: You have access to the personal shop of the Goddess of Love. By using your popularity, you can buy items from her shop. You can find anything you wish inside of it.] - Naughty_J14dに返信 InfinityWolfS2Ch 20 Chapter 20 - Putting Sunscreen on Avery's Mom Back!
- Naughty_J14dに返信 FallenAngeICh 20 Chapter 20 - Putting Sunscreen on Avery's Mom Back!
- Naughty_J16dに返信 _kalki_Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Sent Twenty Years into the Past?!
- Naughty_J16dに返信 goku_t24Ch 17 Chapter 17 - A New Skill, Delicious Milk!
- Naughty_J17dに返信 goku_t24Ch 17 Chapter 17 - A New Skill, Delicious Milk!
- Naughty_J19dに返信 FallenAngeI
Revealing it so early into their relationship is complicated because she might spread rumors about his abilities, which could interest bad crowds making his life more difficult.
Darius wasn't going to tell her that he would be the one making her a great singer. That would stay a secret for the time being. It would be better that way long term. - Naughty_J19dに返信 FallenAngeI
No
[Absolute Hypnosis: You can hypnotize anyone and make them do anything you wish.] - Naughty_J21dに返信 JaywxrldCh 13 Chapter 13 - A New Quest!
- Naughty_J27d発表
Hello, author here. Just thought I'd clarify some things. First, there is no Yuri or NTR in this book. Second, the story will have "plot" coupled with actual plot. Third, The main concept of the book is about a nobody who will become one of the most renowned Manager/Agent in the entire world. However, the way in which he will get recruits is a bit different than one might expect as you saw in the synopsis. To conclude, yes, there will be plenty of "plot". However, they will actually serve a purpose and make the story progress. Now what are you still doing here, go read.
- Naughty_J4mthに返信 kinji_yun
It's not
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Fixed
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