Recently I tried to write in better way can you tell me if I am improving or not (sry for disturbing you as I have no one to tell about my writing)

for a writer their work is equal to their love .

THX THERE WAS ALWAYS SOME MISTAKE LEFT BUT IT FELL GREAT TO GET HELP FROM READER

Ok i try to improve thx for suggestions

Thx bro I recently start correcting my mistakes with grammerly and forget after doing main chapters mistakes correcting to correct summary and Auxiliary chapters thanks for your feedback And i try to make minimum mistake in grammar 😋

I think people don't like it